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Marchmadness
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0 posted 2012-04-02 01:40 PM



As our planet
swings around it's star,
we live, we dream...
we are.
Whoever we may be.

As our planet
swings around it's star,
we're born
and then we cease to be.
We're lost in time...
whatever that may be.

                   Ida Werrett

© Copyright 2012 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2012-04-02 01:46 PM


I don't think all things are lost
somewhere in time, Ida...
I think they are where they are meant
to be...

as my MIL use to say...

it is what it is...






Marchmadness
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2 posted 2012-04-02 01:54 PM


Wherever that may be.
                   Ida

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2012-04-02 02:00 PM


Haha Laughing at Karilea and your comments.

I think we are not so much lost as just being where the timeline wants us to be . . . Haha . . . I can already hear you saying, "Wherever that may be," Ida. Hahahaha!!!

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine
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4 posted 2012-04-02 02:12 PM


Smiling at Ida...and grinning at Jerry, too!

jwesley
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5 posted 2012-04-02 02:15 PM


Cute! ...  It's all karma, anyway. Ask ANY phychic!!

j.

[This message has been edited by jwesley (04-02-2012 07:27 PM).]

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
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6 posted 2012-04-02 02:43 PM


Sometimes I wonder if it isn't so much as who or where we are... just that, for a short time anyway (in the grand scheme of things) we just...ARE.  We choose what to do with that time, as best as we can...  Very thought provoking Ida.
ebonygirl
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7 posted 2012-04-02 07:10 PM


As someone, somewhere,  said, "I ain't touching this".
To good to mess with... Smiles, E

2islander2
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8 posted 2012-04-03 04:10 PM


the idea  of eternity is very confusing, all things must pass sang george harrison, thanks ida for the beautiful images and words of the poem,

loved it


yann

D.Lester Young
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9 posted 2012-04-04 11:00 AM


Were the universe is remembered by our verse, very nice piece.
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
10 posted 2012-04-04 02:59 PM


Thanks, Subshine and Jerry for making me laugh. Thank you all for stopping by and commenting. I appreciate your input.
                               Ida

Margherita
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Eternity
11 posted 2012-04-05 05:38 AM


Ah, Ida, you have that fantastic mind that offers us food for thought ... I am reminded here of my beloved Dr. Joseph Murphy who says "we are children of eternity" ... wherever we are and whatever this may mean.

Margherita

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2012-04-05 10:59 PM


I would like to believe I could be found in heaven...my soul that is because my body will return to dust...James
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
13 posted 2012-04-05 11:06 PM


Thanks Margherita and James. I for one wouldn't mind a new body. One of those Marilyn Monroe models would be nice.
                                 Ida

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