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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-03-31 05:45 AM


Tune up the band
Trombones, Gibson guitar's
Flutes, Xylophones and
Fast-paced drums
After all is assembled
Tuned up and ready to boogie
Play your hearts out
For all the carnal and debauched
World, and give out with a thunderous cheer
For . . .
One day of sensual afflicted good time
Is worth eternity sans lustful doings

©February 24, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton


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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2012-03-31 07:04 AM


quote:
Play your hearts out


Very stirring theme, dear Jerry, and I enjoyed your inviting words. I hear the ouverture ...

Who knows what kind of bliss awaits us up there, certainly peace and serenity seem not close enough to our imaginations and expectations...

Maybe (I hope so!) our ideas of "pleasure" will expand to new heights.

Very nice and inspiring.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-03-31 07:06 AM


Ah, many thanks, Margherita, for the read and very nice comment. Hope all is well with you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2012-03-31 07:59 AM


Gotta love it my friend!


Lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-03-31 08:40 AM


Thank you, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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