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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-03-27 07:44 PM



Only James

Not so long ago
there was
a James and Suzie
and I loved her so.
We were two that seemed
destined to be true,
now I must accept
that as two we are through.

The brightness of the sun
shines on me no more
for I have lost
the woman I adore.
Falling rain saturates
my heart with pain.
It hurts to be
only James.

JamesLee
25March
2012

  

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-03-27 07:49 PM


Have your grief. Shake it off. Go on with life.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2012-03-27 09:15 PM


Ah, JP, that is just what James does...he has a penchant for beauties....

Enjoyed, James...


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2012-03-28 04:34 AM


Thank you Jerry and Sunshine for the nice responses...Jerry I am shaking it off...some take longer than others to get in and get out...James
Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
4 posted 2012-03-28 08:38 AM


It takes time, and thankfully we have a place here where we can express our poetic catharsis among friends.  It will get easier...
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2012-03-28 09:38 AM


Aaaa, you're breakin' my heart, man.
Excellent expression of your deepest emotion.



JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2012-03-28 11:11 AM


Sometimes change is for the better. You never know.
                           Ida

l'artiste
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since 2011-12-01
Posts 19
Washington
7 posted 2012-03-28 02:37 PM


If love is meant to be it finds a way... things happen for a reason and although it may be long, you will find the one you love. Love is a magical thing and when you find it you know it is true... Your words are written nicely. <3 thanks for sharing <3
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