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chickoo007
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since 2007-11-06
Posts 70
India

0 posted 2012-03-26 02:59 PM



A breakup is a phase that makes a man search for gloom even in the happiest of places...
I was listening to George Benson's Nothings gonna change my love for you and I ended up writing this...
Am sorry if it is bad...just sing it to the original tune...and you will hear what my heart says ...


If I had to live my life without you in me,
I would kill myself believe me.
I would never do so wrong !
But you had thought of loving and deceiving,
And left me to the mercies,
Of a heartbroken song !

I gave my heart and my love to you....
But you couldn't even be true !?

Left my heart, downing now, in a pool of tears shed for you...

Nothings gonna change my love for you,
Though it pains to know How much I love you !
But one thing you can be sure of...
I am never asking for any of your love!

Nothings gonna change my love for you,
Though it pains to know How much I love you !
But one thing you can be sure of...
Nothings gonna make me trust you !

You had promised me, you wouldn't ever leave me.
You and me together,
You would never go afar!
Left me all alone in OUR journey,
Your love was someone else's.
From the very start!

Why did you ever say you were mine!?
When you knew that you would leave me behind!!!

A broken heart, a loveless life, is all that I have now,without you...

Nothings gonna change my love for you,
Though it pains to know How much I love you !
But one thing you can be sure of...
I am never asking for any of your love!

Nothings gonna change my love for you,
Though it pains to know How much I love you !
But one thing you can be sure of...
Nothings gonna make me trust you !



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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2012-03-26 09:23 PM


Heartfelt write.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2012-03-27 07:40 PM


Fine writing...love doesn't always work out as planned...but you know that...James
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