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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2012-03-22 09:44 PM


I pour onto the sidewalk
laughter in my head
smiling peevishly to the moon
oft wallowing to the hills
To the stars in the sky
I am dark nothingness
full matched angst
portrayed valiance
The swift failure of the city
daggers to my eyes
conjoined focus distance
laughing at my life
Thus I step lightly
on the doorstep of eternity
twice removed from society
I bleed the new.

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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-03-22 09:55 PM


Hah! I know the feeling "twice removed from society," in my case it was thrice removed.

WORD TO HUSBANDS . . .
To keep your marriage brimming
With love in the loving cup,
Whenever you're wrong, admit it;
Whenever you're right, shut up

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
2 posted 2012-03-22 11:31 PM


Your poem was an interesting read. Left me wondering about it's sequel.
ms. e

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