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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2012-03-22 01:56 PM


                      Sartori

What could be more pure and wondrous  
than the final kiss by Spring moonlight
in these immortal, mystic hours  just
   before dawn ...
or more grand and beautiful than
two hearts and spirits tasting
the first bloom of weightless love
in finest anticipation of all that is
   to come
with the blessings and ascendant
radiance of the morning star.

                --- b. e. adams (3/22/2012)



© Copyright 2012 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-03-22 02:07 PM


Man, this is beautiful. You are, without a doubt, PiP's romance writer supreme.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine
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2 posted 2012-03-22 05:10 PM


Ah, Bruce, when these nights are conducive
to a lightening of the raindrops,
the scattering of clouds,
the stars themselves are most
incessantly beautiful...

as is this poem.




OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
3 posted 2012-03-22 06:16 PM


Dreamily exquisite, Bruce.

Owl

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2012-03-22 06:19 PM


Enjoyed...James
ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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5 posted 2012-03-22 08:49 PM


Very pretty... Romance is alive in your poetry.
Enjoyed, Ms. E

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
6 posted 2012-03-23 01:53 AM


You are the master of romantic poetry, Bruce. No doubt about it.
                            Ida

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