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Open Poetry #48

Virgin Snowdrops

Ron63
Junior Member

since 2012-03-18

Posts 49
Suffolk, Eng, UK

0 posted 2012-03-22 01:27 PM

VIRGIN SNOWDROPS

there was once a garden
in ancient times
where snow had fallen
on meadow land
a lady weeping, wanting flowers
was soothed by an angel
from heaven, grand

the angel breathed a magical breath
on flakes of falling snow
and the lady watched
when flakes were planted
and beautiful snowdrops began to grow

innocent, sweet, and honey scented
they rose above the green
white and pure,
as pure as virgins with pearly heads
bowing to the morning sun, supreme

[This message has been edited by Ron63 (03-23-2012 08:46 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2012-03-22 05:09 PM

Legends and myths
make for lovely dream pillows.

Enjoyed, Ron63. Thank you!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2012-03-22 06:19 PM

And your snowdrop poem is as magical as the angel's breath in the poem.

Owl

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-03-22 11:52 PM

Enjoyed the snow flowers you painted, well done.
Ms. E

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2012-03-23 12:31 PM

the angel breathed a magical breath
on flakes of falling snow
and the lady watched
when flakes were planted
and beautiful snowdrops began to grow

What a lovely tale you've told! Beautiful write... and perfect for spring!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2012-03-23 10:02 PM

Very well done.
I could envision its unfolding...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2012-03-24 01:11 AM

I am liking your poetry, Ron.
Ida

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

7 posted 2012-03-24 10:42 PM

Simply stated and delicate, just as the context of the poem. Very lovely..

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