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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-03-22 05:44 AM

I spoke your name aloud,
With gladness in my heart;
Your name found an echo,
And brought it back to me.

I spoke your name softly,
With all the love I have;
Your name stayed inside me,
Never to leave again.

I spoke your name to you,
You smiled that smile I love;
You spoke my name to me,
And now two names are one.

©January 14, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2012-03-22 06:29 AM

Nodding. You heard it too. There was something about the rain tonight that did a tango...

very lovely writing jer...a gentle side of you I much enjoyed being blatantly voyeuristic.

There's contentment in this. I think it look good on you.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-03-22 06:38 AM

Appreciate the nice comment, Serenity. Yes, I have always loved the rain, it soothes the devils which are about. My mutt Zoe isn't too crazy about it, she needs to walk, poor baby.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2012-03-22 07:34 AM

very sweet and romantinc, I'm partial to that side of you too

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-03-22 07:36 AM

Thank you, Lori, I appreciate your kind words.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2012-03-22 11:12 AM

Not all men make good romantics...

so I enjoy reading them that are...

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-03-22 11:29 AM

What a nice thing to say, Karilea, and I thank you so much for saying it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

7 posted 2012-03-22 11:59 PM

The name of a lover... whispered throught the day...
ignites... um... lots of things. lol, enjoyed your poem JP.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-03-23 05:39 AM

Hello, Ms E, nice of you to stop by, than you for your sweet comments.

WORD TO HUSBANDS . . .
To keep your marriage brimming
With love in the loving cup,
Whenever you're wrong, admit it;
Whenever you're right, shut up

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2012-03-23 09:21 AM

Very nice, Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-03-23 09:46 AM

Thanks JL. Appreciate it.

WORD TO HUSBANDS . . .
To keep your marriage brimming
With love in the loving cup,
Whenever you're wrong, admit it;
Whenever you're right, shut up

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2012-03-31 07:49 PM

Enjoyed...James

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2012-03-31 07:56 PM

Thanks...Jerry

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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