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Abe
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2012-03-18 07:25 PM



Lost Within Someone

I sit and look around me
And I wonder, where I been?
See, some places that I was
Where I will, never, be again.

Some of them made me happy
Some places, made me sad
Some times were the very worst
And some, the best, I ever had.

There’s things, that I might change
Or wouldn’t, even if I could
Might have tried, to learn some lessons
That, I never, understood.

Then, one time I met a person
Who, won my soul and heart
And, I got lost within someone
Where my life will end, or start!

Del “Abe” Jones
© 03.18.2012

Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. copyright 1984

© Copyright 2012 Del - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2012-03-18 09:26 PM


Nice...James
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2 posted 2012-03-19 03:42 PM


I got lost within someone
Where my life will end, or start!

I hope they're lost within you as well! *S* I really enjoyed this!

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