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Open Poetry #48

In the Hall Two People Did Laugh

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-03-16 05:40 AM

I looked around expecting fire,
Saw none and wasn't scared by half;
Expected a funeral pyre,
In the hall two people did laugh.

A man and woman I could tell,
She sounded like a newborn calf;
He called her name, he said Adele,
In the hall two people did laugh.

©March 15, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2012-03-16 05:51 AM

thank goodness~~~it was just a joke!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-03-16 05:54 AM

It isn't over yet, Baby Doll. Thank you for the read and comment.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

3 posted 2012-03-16 05:58 AM

So many things happening in that hall!
What's happening next? LOL
Kat >^..^<

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-03-16 06:08 AM

Hi Kat, yep, the hall is shaking things up. One more episode after then and I will stop posting the hall for a while. Thank you for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2012-03-16 06:10 AM

I like this series, Jerry.
Been readin' all of them..
These thin slices of emotional meat
make me think about what will happen next..

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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6 posted 2012-03-16 08:13 AM

one more? you are such a tease Mr. Bolton!

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

7 posted 2012-03-16 08:23 AM

Thank you ice, I appreciate your following the little series I have going . . .

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Morning Lori, haha!! I guess tease is the name of the "Hall" series for sure. Thanks for stopping by.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

MICHELMAS
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since 2012-02-15

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Lancashire England

8 posted 2012-04-03 07:43 AM

just catching up, after a few days away...enjoying the saga

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2012-04-03 09:14 AM

Thanks, Michael, appreciate it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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