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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-03-13 09:46 PM


Take Two

Sometimes it doesn't matter
what you really want
or don't want because...
time and location and situations
create desires and actions
that you may interpret as love.
Personally you can't help yourself,
to her you will give all of your heart
no matter what, hoping that love is
something that is reciprocated,
still it doesn't always work out
to everyones satisfaction
and you have to know
when to let go...
because it
takes two.

JamesLee
11March
2012

  

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-03-13 09:48 PM


Yep. It does take two, James.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

suthern
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since 1999-07-29
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2 posted 2012-03-14 08:35 AM


That it does, my friend... and how well I know!

I liked this very much!

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2012-03-14 06:54 PM


"Sometimes it doesn't matter
what you really want
or don't want because...
time and location and situations
create desires and actions
that you may interpret as love."

Nice point.
Nicer write.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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