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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-03-13 05:42 AM

I locked the door, hearing its click,
Inside The Hovel I felt good;
Picked up the phone to call a chick,
But in the hall somebody stood.

I shook off the effect of fear,
And I called the girl like I should;
To calm my nerves I had a beer,
Still . . . in the hall somebody stood.

©March 12, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-13-2012 08:28 AM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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1 posted 2012-03-13 06:17 AM

Mysterious....

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-03-13 06:21 AM

Haha! Yes. Thank you Lori.

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bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

3 posted 2012-03-13 08:52 AM

mysterious indeed...hope you're not being followed! LOL fun poem!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-03-13 08:59 AM

Thanks, Baby Girl. I hope not also, although, every night somebody in the hall stands.

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ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2012-03-13 01:27 PM

Maybe they came to you for help, ask them if you are able to help them with anything. I wonder what they would say. Just a suggestion, Ms. E

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-03-13 01:39 PM

Hah! Not me, Ms E., I'm huddled in the corner with the lights out. Haha! Thanks for the comment and suggestion . . .

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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2012-03-13 04:40 PM

Jerry...

this has all of the beginnings of a good story...

continue, please!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2012-03-13 05:00 PM

Ah, that may be a possibility, Karilea. Thank you for the comment.

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JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2012-03-13 07:24 PM

Nice Jerry!
Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2012-03-13 07:26 PM

Thank you, JL, your comments are appreciated.

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