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MusicLynn
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0 posted 2012-03-12 05:04 PM



In the night, we can dream.
In the night, we won't be seen.
In the night, our differences hide.
In the night, the past falls behind.
In the night, our lives will change.
In the night, life will turn its page.
In the night, we cloak our minds.
In the night, there's no more lies.

In the night, we can dream.
In the night, we'll never been seen.

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1 posted 2012-03-12 08:42 PM


Welcome to PiP, ML. I hope that you will come to enjoy your stay here.

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ice
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2 posted 2012-03-12 09:24 PM



Like Robert Frost, and you, and "I have been one aquainted with the night." you speak of.

It does all that you say..

Thank you for the poem.

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3 posted 2012-03-12 11:10 PM


Welcome to pip and cheers to your first post!
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4 posted 2012-03-13 07:47 PM


Welcome to Passions! I look forward to reading more of your work!
JL
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5 posted 2012-03-14 07:21 PM


Very nice write.


JL

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Juju
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6 posted 2012-03-15 02:58 PM


Welcome to passions.  I enjoyed your poem.  I will look forward to more.

Juli

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Margherita
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7 posted 2012-04-09 04:23 AM


quote:
In the night, our differences hide


And that is a wonderful thing to happen!

Welcome to Pip! I just clicked at random on the page your poem was and I am glad I found you. Maybe you will peek in for a second look?

Margherita  

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