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Ethern
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since 2010-07-01
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on a plane

0 posted 2012-03-12 11:17 AM



Sitting here alone
Clinging to your phone
Hoping you’re not gone
Praying you’ll come home

I will be ok
If you go your separate way
But I wish that you would stay
So that we can share our days

Laughing, Loving, Smiling, and Hoping
Surviving, Striving, Thriving, and Coping

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2012-03-13 09:37 PM


Nice...James
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2012-03-14 07:19 PM


Very nice "Message in a Bottle", I hope
it can reach its intended destination.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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