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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2012-03-09 06:34 AM

from that voice inside of your eyes within this dawn
I can recognize you are comfortable with this glass
being the only thing between our compatible demons
when they make those fingers on wet windows sounds

I love your hair mostly when it is abandoned wild
from your pillow fight flights with eyes closed
and you say my fingers are vulgar strangers then
making messes out of your proper lady like prayers

but you know the god of me hears them and answers
and kneels behind you when you are beside yourself
so I can know your pale shoulders when they glisten
and can taste your mouth when it pants it's heat

and this glass between us is our commingle of perspiration

____________

daark

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2012-03-09 06:50 AM

Neruda, his hand on the poets shoulder.

"Good job, my son...I see romance has not died in the twenty first century, and that makes me very happy...carry on."

[This message has been edited by ice (03-09-2012 07:59 AM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2012-03-09 08:35 AM

Thanks so much icemigo....

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

3 posted 2012-03-09 08:55 AM

This makes Neruda pale in comparison, Daddy... I love it. The glass is less like a boundary and more like an extension.

"but you know the god of me hears them and answers" /smile ... If I have faith in anything, it is that.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2012-03-09 09:03 AM

Ms Nitch, if you always wore love words, I would never undress you. Thanks baby

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

5 posted 2012-03-12 08:50 AM

love your windows, daddy~*~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2012-03-12 08:53 AM

BBBel1e, thank you little girl for your naughty eyes

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2012-03-13 07:18 PM

I love your hair mostly when it is abandoned wild
from your pillow fight flights with eyes closed

What a wonderful image... sultry yet very tender. *S*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2012-03-13 08:44 PM

Ms Suthern...thanks ms

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2012-04-02 12:11 PM

Loving this.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2012-04-02 06:52 AM

Ms Ali-San, thank you

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