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Ethern
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0 posted 2012-03-08 02:33 PM



A sterling heart
of silver and steel
with delicate dreams
and a flexible will

bends before breaking
when put to the test
but melts in the heat
of the fire nonetheless.

© Copyright 2012 Derrick E. Gillum - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2012-04-01 11:52 PM


Very, very nice, Etheren.  I don't know how your poem got bypassed.  Maybe it was waiting for me.  

Alison

ebonygirl
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2 posted 2012-04-02 09:07 AM


Enjoyed your poem... "a sterling heart ".
ms. e

jwesley
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3 posted 2012-04-02 09:13 AM


Nicely done, my friend...enjoyed.

j.

JL
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4 posted 2012-04-02 09:54 AM


Very nice poetry.
Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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