In All Her Freckled Beauty

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Open Poetry #48

In All Her Freckled Beauty

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-03-07 12:10 PM

In All Her Freckled Beauty

Pipi I remember when
you started wearing
high heals and silk dresses
with your long stockings
still in place
and from a distance
I though you were
another woman
but when I came in close
the freckles and the pigtails
and your beautiful smile
were still in style.
Still from that day forward
I knew that things had changed,
like a butterfly
silly young girls
transform into desirable
women right before your eyes,
learning how to kiss
and leaving hearts amiss,
like the artist that paints
the essence of you
and the poets that write
of a woman in longstockings
as sweet as you.

JamesLee
03March
2012

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-03-07 04:08 AM

Nicely written, James.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2012-03-07 05:03 PM

Now James, you had me from the getgo with this one...

charming, reminiscent, and heady with little girl grown up goodness...

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-03-08 12:13 PM

Yep... what Sunshine said. ms. e

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2012-03-08 12:49 PM

Roy Orbison wrote and sang a song about this vision in your poem subject: "Pretty Woman"

I think this is one of your best, James.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2012-03-08 07:27 PM

Agree with JL and especially Sunshine...

cool piece, my friend.

j.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2012-03-09 06:03 PM

nice write james, vibrant and loving work, enjoyed a lot

yann

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