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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2012-03-06 06:10 PM


Stirring the pot
creating commotion...

to find the bone
with the marrow in

Running back into
the burning house …

within the flames
to find their zen


LGR(C)3/6/12





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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-03-06 06:16 PM


Have no idea why they do it, Lori, but it seems to be a nation-wide trend.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2012-03-06 06:30 PM


I do, I'm a statistic LOL!  It didn't space the way I wanted it too but maybe it reads better like this...

Lori

Sunshine
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3 posted 2012-03-06 08:55 PM


Hey sweetie...

been too long between talks...

but I do believe I understand this very moment. If from my window, what do I see, but Lori-like chempoetry....


tracie66
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4 posted 2012-03-06 09:04 PM


I don't understand it either - some sort of crazy kick, can't be happy though. ~hugs~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2012-03-07 06:14 AM


Ha! My daughter was right it could use another stanza. Sunshine, what is chempoetry?

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2012-03-07 06:22 AM


Tracie66- I was trying to say I understand why some people do the oppopsite of what would be considered rational...like a moth to the flame. I was contemplating my own crazyness (quitting smoking has been very hard)

Lori

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