If You've Got It, Flaunt It (Octologue)

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Open Poetry #48

If You've Got It, Flaunt It (Octologue)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-03-06 03:55 PM

The Octologue is eight syllabic lines with each line capped. The pattern is: 3/5/3/3/5/3/3/

Big-breasted,
Flaunts her chest so pink,
Bobbing here,
Thrusting there,
She thinks she's so cool,
Look at her,
Don't you look,
Robin's breast.

©Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2012-03-06 06:13 PM

HA! Good one Jerry! Had me going, hook, line and sinker...you stinker!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-03-06 06:15 PM

Ah that's sweet, Lori, thank you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

3 posted 2012-03-06 06:15 PM

smiling here

great picture you painted

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-03-06 06:17 PM

Thank you, luminosity, I appreciate it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2012-03-06 09:00 PM

hahaha! all smiles

what a fun Octologue.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-03-06 09:12 PM

Hah! Thank you tracie66, I am happy you like the poem.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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