Open Poetry #48 |
Over |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Over A veil of relief sweeps over me The world has not ended I can still smile Juju -Juju |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Great message you have given to the world, for and to us. Well done, Ms. E |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
And, I am happy that you are in this world that has not ended and continue to share yout poems. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
On a recent trip to Guam there was one particular stewardess that smiled the whole trip and it made my day...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
great, hope walking is easier (don't know exactly what it means), thanks juju for the lovely poem, yann |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
very well written.......each and every one of us has something that we are glad is 'over' |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
very well written and so true ~hugs~ |
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chickoo007 Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 70India |
Yes and its this thought that keeps hope alive and its hope that keeps is going ! Amazing write ! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"It ain't over tell the fat lady sings." (I hear she has laryngitis)... Enjoyed your write... JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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