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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2012-03-03 04:52 PM


Over


A veil of relief sweeps over me
The world has not ended
I can still smile

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

© Copyright 2012 Juju - All Rights Reserved
ebonygirl
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1 posted 2012-03-03 06:09 PM


Great message you have given to the world, for and to us. Well done, Ms. E
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Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-27
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
2 posted 2012-03-04 11:13 PM


And, I am happy that you are in this world that has not ended and continue to share yout poems.

A

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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3 posted 2012-03-05 07:29 PM


On a recent trip to Guam there was one particular stewardess that smiled the whole trip and it made my day...James
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
4 posted 2012-03-06 01:57 AM


great, hope walking is easier (don't know exactly what it means), thanks juju for the lovely poem,

yann

luminosity
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5 posted 2012-03-06 06:25 PM


very well written.......each and every one of us has something that we are glad is 'over'
tracie66
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Australia
6 posted 2012-03-06 09:13 PM


very well written and so true ~hugs~
chickoo007
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India
7 posted 2012-03-12 04:26 PM


Yes and its this thought that keeps hope alive and its hope that keeps is going !
Amazing write !

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
8 posted 2012-03-14 07:57 PM


"It ain't over tell the fat lady sings."
(I hear she has laryngitis)...

Enjoyed your write...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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