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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Spring Spring is arriving, arriving, arriving Fresh air breezes in You, are arriving with the sweetness it brings My flute of lullabies Sways me awake, enters into my soul Stirring me slow Spring's bass note beats Into my soul The door I've left opened For only you to enter in Spring is arriving, arriving, arriving Spring's arriving Enter in, enter in You are welcomed Enter in. --------------------------------- E.M.L. |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is an awesome poem. I am glad spring is coming because it means the cold weather will soon end. I truly enjoyed the read!!!  When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you, a newness comes to us all, Doc. Angel. ms. e |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
spring is such a melody as your poem does, thanks for the very enjoyable read, yann |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thanks Yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Brrr! It is cold, windy and nasty outside my window, but I know spring is jut around the corner. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Spring arrives here very slowly, but the music of your poem is very encouraging. I read this, this morning, it was 12 degrees outside, and that was discouraging.. I thought, it's winter yet, and yet still the poet sings of spring... I listend to your song, and felt better. |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
lovely words and today we have sunshine....spring may have sprung Michael |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My flute of lullabies Sways me awake, enters into my soul Stirring me slow ~*~ Now, this is the way to wake... not like the bone-crunching sensation I felt this morning when jarred awake! Lovely, ebony... |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Yes, Jerry Spring is watching and waiting outside your window, ready to take away the chill. Smiles, ms. e |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you James and MICHELMAS for stopping by to read. ms. e |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Ice, 12 degrees, wow! I will pray to the gods to send you all more sunshine and light. Sunshine might be busy though writing her poetry. Thank you for your kind reply. ms. e |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you, Sunshine! My alarm clock does that too, but not on Saturdays! Lol, ms. e |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Good ode to Spring! I'd like to hear that 'flute of lullabies' |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
spring is my favorite season as well...lets all clap and give her welcome! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this is joyful, one of my fave season's - we're coming into Autumn here but Autumn is another fave so I'm okay with that  Loved this! Love is the life of the soul... |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you 2ndHand and a Luminosity, ms. e |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sunshine stole my thunder! Enjoyed the whole read, but I love that part! j. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Spring is arriving, arriving, arriving Fresh air breezes in You, are arriving with the sweetness it brings" Great write Ms. E. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thanks Tracy, J and JL, appreciate you all. Smiles, Ms. E |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The door I've left opened For only you to enter in And when the right one comes through that door, our souls are renewed, whatever the calendar says. *S* Beautiful write! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Suthern, you're so right on. Ms. E |
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Nigelinoz Member
since 2012-07-24
Posts 71Victoria,Australia |
Ah spring, The season of rebirth. Lovely writing ebonygirl,you stir something within me with this. Cheers N'oz You may as well give cherries to a pig as give advice to a fool- |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A cool, refreshing breeze in this heat of summer, Edna. I hear a flute in the background. Ida |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Nigelinoz and Ida, Thank you so much for your comments, I do appreciate your time. Ms. E |
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