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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2012-03-02 06:09 PM


                 Renewal

The first dew-covered flowers
dance by the gentle breeze
and long sunlight in the infinite
promise of morning and Spring.
What could be more true or beautiful,
along these clear forest waters,
than this moment of untouched
  elegance out of time
and a heart of pure joy?

           --- b. e. adams (3/02/2012)


© Copyright 2012 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2012-03-02 06:22 PM


Offhand, Bruce, I can;t think of anything more beautiful than the words and images of this poem.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2012-03-02 09:28 PM


Very nice...James
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2012-03-03 12:14 PM


Spring is putting on a fine show here too, Bruce. Wish I could write about it as well as you do.
                          Ida

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2012-03-03 02:20 AM


Really, really beautiful.  I especially love your happy poems, Bruce.

Owl

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
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Florida
5 posted 2012-03-03 08:33 AM


You have captured my favorite time of day, perfectly.
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