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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-03-02 05:41 AM




her scent, like fresh snow
falling just outside the window
on this dark, Poeish night
has the sensory effect
of a hypnotic trance
the earthen, pleasing fragrance
an aphrodisiac
much like the snow dreamily falling
making history of the night

©December 28, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton


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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2012-03-02 06:43 AM


Wow!Jerry !!!


Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-03-02 07:28 PM


Thanks, Lori.

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JamesMichael
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3 posted 2012-03-02 09:17 PM


Nice romantic writing...James
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-03-02 09:20 PM


Thanks James.

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Sunshine
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5 posted 2012-03-02 10:24 PM


Lovely, Jerry.
JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-03-03 07:55 AM


Thanks, Karilea.

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