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march of nines |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there had always been that marching of nines those shimmer limbed lovely trees of forbidden with fruit I would pick with glutton fingerings then admire my smile when wet from their gluing and then you were there beside my mind sideways more eleven than a dime, because of how you fit skin and that wicked blend of wanting to taste of secrets until you had your belly full of everything sin sung we could line up empty bottles along your heavenly like newly discovered old friends by the hour, ours more decadent than nonchalant, but just as natural too how those things free fell from your lips like whispers though you swallowed a few before you kissed them ___________ daark |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
mercy lol grin ... like a glove; makes all the difference in the world. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Nitch...you are cute in your mittens.. and the high heels of course. Thanks babe |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
gonna see if this one is water proof and take it to the bath tub. ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Ali-san, it wont rub off babe...I make the ink special. Thanks |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
There is a fine line that divides a nine from an eleven, But the "shimmer limbed lovely trees" here in pip are all dozens...I hope they know that. Their replies, and poems fall "from your (their) lips like whispers" Many of your poems, make love to their ears, And I am the voyeur in daark shadows.. Watching with intensity, how your poems Often move minds to forbidden places, By the perfect placement of words.
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
James, thank you sir. ___ Icemigo....aye there a forest of 9s in the blue valley...only a smile would make them all elevens for sure. Thanks guy |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Been a long time since I've read you... you have a way with words... they just sort of hum along... and hit you. Nice to read you again |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
/Thanks friend |
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