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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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0 posted 2012-02-26 11:58 PM



This is basically what I was told on Lulu.com. I am so frustrated I could cry.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I have been told
in not so many words
that my poetry
basically sucks


Lines of words
that are strangely
placed
that never rhyme


Your poetry sucks
as plain as day
plays through my
mind like a bad
song


Your books shall
never be sold
Your poetry is
the worst
I am told
over and over
again


You have no
future
Get a life
and move on

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


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Alison
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1 posted 2012-02-27 12:01 PM


You know, we all told we suck at sometime and it hurts. However, you have to wonder at the agenda of people who would say that to you.  I don't think your poetry sucks.  I think it reflects who you are.  Who are the Poetry Police? Perhaps their insecurities are showing.  People are petty and mean.  Keep your chin up.  You created something -- and that is a wonderful thing.

Alison

ebonygirl
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2 posted 2012-02-27 12:26 PM


Keep on posting your poems. We are here to listen and enjoy your poems. Ms. E
JerryPat2
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3 posted 2012-02-27 05:44 AM


This makes me want to type out  long list of cuss words because, as Alison said, who are the Poetry Police? Delete the comment and move on.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Nicole
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4 posted 2012-02-27 06:54 AM


People who offer words like that, are often just out to hurt.  Don't give them that.  Does it hurt?  Yes... but you had faith in your writing enough to post it there, to put it out, and to put it here - you KNOW what your talent is, so own that.  Be strong, and ignore those that would try to stumble you along the way.  
The_Doctors_Angel_32
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5 posted 2012-02-27 05:42 PM


Thank you for all your kind comments. What that person told me lat night made me feel real bad. I shall survive to write another day. I shall write more books. I have actually written 3. Only 2 are up for people to buy right now. If you want the new and improved links to my books you may contact me.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


oceanvu2
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Santa Monica, California, USA
6 posted 2012-02-27 11:12 PM


Well, Lulu's just another publisher, not even a badge carrying member of the Poetry Police.  If you get turned down by a publisher, you're in pretty good company.  If you get turned down by a whole lot of publishers, you might be in very, very good company.  Publishers aren't inherently evil, they just have a terrible track record when it comes to picking winners or discerning quality in poetry or prose.

It was just somebody talking.  Write it off and write on.

Best, Jimbeaux

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2012-02-28 02:42 PM


If I were you I would stay off Lulu.com.
You have every right to write if you chose to and the more you write the better you get.
                                ida

ken206573
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8 posted 2012-02-28 04:30 PM


I always enjoy your poems as I do for the rest on pip. Don't worry your poetry is splendid.
The_Doctors_Angel_32
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9 posted 2012-02-28 10:07 PM


Thank you for your kind comments. I am still writing. My books are still able to be bought. I have just been ignoring the message boards. I know now my books will never live up to their standards. But I still hope beyond hope that someone will buy my books just because they like what is in it.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


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10 posted 2012-02-28 10:09 PM


Do not condone the behavior of bullies.  Walk away.  Do not read the comments.

A

katahdin
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11 posted 2012-02-29 01:50 AM


Forget Lulu.com! I use Xlibris.com to pulbish my childerns book and they were great
to work with. I'm now working with them to publish my first book of poems.
Keep writing! If you like it then that's what counts because it's you and it's part of who you are and nobody can take that from you. I like your writing especially about you cats. I have 4 purr-babies myself.
Kat >^..^<

JL
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12 posted 2012-02-29 01:52 AM


Hey!  I resemble that poem...

You keep writing!  Critics are a dime a dozen.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

MICHELMAS
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13 posted 2012-02-29 05:33 AM



Some of the best poems probably lie in dark drawers somewhere never seen by anyone other than the author
You cannot please everyone all of the time, and when it comes to poetry it is difficult to please anyone most of the time.
You have a talent keep on writing
Michael

luminosity
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14 posted 2012-02-29 03:07 PM


I couldn't rhyme a poem if my life depended on it.........you don't suck! poets of all stature are gifted
tracie66
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15 posted 2012-03-06 09:12 PM


we can all relate sweetie - poetry is from the heart and soul, poetry is written because we FEEL, sharing our thoughts, reflections, memories, moments and emotions through poetry. It does not matter how it's written, whatever form, it is someones way of showing others just how they are feeling, I think that if people cannot take from that, something then they're worth nothing.
dear lady, please keep writing, we love your post's - floating my winged ~hugs~ your way.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

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