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Abe
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2012-02-26 09:51 PM



Wordy Nerdy

I’ve got all these words a’swirlin’
All around in my crazy mind
And, I keep on a’ searching
Trying to the right kind.

If I really wrote my feelings
‘twould make somebody sad
Because most of my thoughts
Are, rally kinda bad!

I rarely do some editing
And my spelling checker’s broke
So, you’ll just have to read thise words
My brokn mind has spoke.

Prob’bly nobody wants to here
But, I don’’t relly care
Cause all I can do is the thoughts
That are here or were there.

I’ve been one place for a ear
And coan’t count a ingle froend
And I just seem to be waiting
Until the waiting ends.

It does’nt relly bother me
Kinda used to where I am
No matter howI try and try
Just end up right here ahain.

And, if some can’t figure it out
There’s nothing much to say
Except its mush easier
TOO writ it all this way‼


Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. copyright 1984

[This message has been edited by Abe (02-27-2012 10:49 AM).]

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1 posted 2012-02-26 11:12 PM


Never saw so many typos in your poetry, Abe.  Makes me wonder if they were part of the plan.  I like this poem - hate to think that you are that alone, but maybe you are and maybe you aren't.  I try not to put people's personal lives in their poetry (if that makes sense).  I read your poems - and as I said yesterday, don't always agree.  However, I do appreciate that you have a point of view.

A

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2 posted 2012-02-27 10:36 AM


And I just seem to be waiting
Until the waiting ends.

Many of us know that feeling... including me. I'm so glad we  have words... they seem to make the wait easier.

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