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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2012-02-21 02:36 AM



dreams come true
with time
nights beautiful open sky
moonbeam star streaming
wishes on the wind
summer will soon begin
awakening again

James D. Wolf III

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil)

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MICHELMAS
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1 posted 2012-02-21 04:01 AM


ah dreams......if only

Michael

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2 posted 2012-02-21 06:01 AM


Ah, summer will be here, but first we have to meander through unpredictable spring.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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3 posted 2012-02-21 08:52 AM


This is lovely, Wolfman~~~

So good to see you on the Blue Pages!

XOXO

              

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4 posted 2012-02-21 12:56 PM


I want a guarantee on those dreams! LOL A written one!

Seriously... this is very beautiful... from title through last word!

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5 posted 2012-02-21 02:56 PM


I know it should have read spring will soon begin, but I had to jump ahead to summer I am so tired of winter. Great to hear your comments thanks for reading, I am gonna start posting more soon!

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil)

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6 posted 2012-02-22 12:26 PM


Thank you, Wolf, for reminding me that
"dreams come true with time". I needed to hear that today.
Ms. E

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7 posted 2012-02-22 06:40 AM


"moonbeam star streaming
wishes on the wind"

Oh, my goodness, how exquisite!  

I am so envious of your surname.  

Owl

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8 posted 2012-02-26 11:53 PM


This is lovely .. and hopeful.  I like it.



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