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ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

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California U.S.A

0 posted 2012-02-20 02:33 PM

Feminine

She, feminine
Without walls, without barriers
Only her essence as Her clothing
Eyes closed, long Black hair
Cascades
A gentle waterfall Drapes onto his
Hands, she, let's Him touch, she soothes,
Soothes his soul, Soothing, a Spring,
pure - music - magical
Notes cascade
Rain, gentle, rain
Mists, born from two
Can you hear them?

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E.M.L.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-02-20 02:35 PM

Yes, most certainly, MS E., I can hear the gentle mists, and am listening to it even now as I speak to you. Lovely poetry. From the heart poetry. I can tell, you know.

I didn't know it was for Ice until I had already commented, I hope he doesn't mind my intrusion.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

2 posted 2012-02-20 02:38 PM

Thank you Jerry, big smile for you my friend.
Ms. E

ebonygirl
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3 posted 2012-02-20 03:17 PM

Jerry,
This is another poem inspired by the group Collective
Awakening's song- Walk in Beauty.
Thank you JP,
Ms. E

ebonygirl
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4 posted 2012-02-20 03:20 PM

LOL, Ice was teasing me about Threshold Song, sooo
Am teasing him back, shhh... don't tell.

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2012-02-21 07:52 AM

EG
Here it is, a response to my "teasing"..:-)

Love it...I said:

"There are many meanings to the word "threshold" please let me hear another song"

Gather all of your feminine,romantic poems in a chapbook..that would be lovely.

Thank you for the song.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2012-02-21 12:52 PM

This is beautiful... I read it several times and loved it more with each reading! *S*

ebonygirl
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7 posted 2012-02-22 12:33 PM

Ice- lol, you are very kind, Thank you

Suthern- Thank you for smiling at my poem, because of you, I wear one too!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2012-02-22 11:12 AM

I read most of what you write, my friend, and this, to me, is the best of you to date. Totally enjoyed.

j.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2012-02-22 09:58 PM

I think I agree with Jimmy.
ida

ebonygirl
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10 posted 2012-02-23 01:17 AM

Thank you for your kind replies, J and Ida.

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