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MICHELMAS
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since 2012-02-15
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Lancashire England

0 posted 2012-02-20 04:12 AM


Scarecrow

October morn and autumn mist and winter chills afar
Sunlight's fingers dance on the pond and Merlin's wands cast spells
Reflecting in the tranquil pool your thoughts so very deep
And magpie watching flies away,your secret he soon tells

And surely then the sun did rise its warmth upon your face
Your shadow long across the field a scarecrow tries to smile
His clothing worn and rooks to roost to watch the seasons change
Come stand with me in morning hush,together for a while

And apples fall in coloured tones to lie upon the grass
Uneaten fruit and wasps pursuit and cider days to come
An English vale with sunlight pale so warm within your heart
As eyes grow dim these things remain,beneath the setting sun

Remember me when I am gone and watch the morning sun
For I am there within the rays my smile in dappled trees
My spirit plays in waterfalls my voice upon the wind
So close your eyes and you will see,just as the scarecrow sees


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Member Seraphic
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Louisiana
1 posted 2012-02-20 09:52 AM


Remember me when I am gone and watch the morning sun
For I am there within the rays my smile in dappled trees
My spirit plays in waterfalls my voice upon the wind
So close your eyes and you will see

I liked the entire poem... but love these lines... so very beautiful!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2012-02-22 06:52 AM


Like Ruth, I love the whole poem and especially the last stanza, but I also love the personnified scarecrow.  Please give him a cheery greeting and a big smile from me when you see him next.

Owl

MICHELMAS
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since 2012-02-15
Posts 305
Lancashire England
3 posted 2012-02-22 10:41 AM


thank you both.
Owl, I will certainly pass on your regards

Michael

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