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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2012-02-19 10:41 PM



The small brown box
with dovetailed corners
scuffs and scratches
gouges and lines
a delicate hook clasp
and memories of mine
used to sit on a shelf
overlooking dad's desk


Upon this old battered box
used to sit a one eyed peg-legged pirate
made of modeling clay
that could still be amended by fingers
next to whom seemingly floated
an ugly duck from a 3rd grader's
recall of a decoy  
her Daddy collected
Kiln baked and glazed

Now the box is mine
I made the pirate walk the plank
and my duck only a daddy could love
is tucked in a corner of the hutch
What sits upon it now beside me
is a snow globe picture frame
My mother is smiling
overlooking me
as I write

LGR(c)2/19/12

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-02-20 05:28 AM


Ahh . . . Precious . . . This is such wonderful thoughts and just . . . . Precious . . .Feel bad about the pirate and little duck though . . .Especially the pirate, aaarg!

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2012-02-20 06:11 AM


Trust me they were ugly....Dad and I still remember, that is enough

Lori

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3 posted 2012-02-20 09:56 AM


It's amazing how many memories a small box can contain... both of what's there and what isn't. The last 3 lines really touched me!
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4 posted 2012-02-26 05:00 PM


When I was little, my Dad made us Treasure Boxes.  Sounds like you have one too.

A

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