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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2012-02-19 09:20 PM



Until the Love Flows

My eyes
want to admire your beauty
My ears
want to hear your sweet voice
My nose
wants to smell your fragrance
My lips
want to kiss your soft lips
My hands
want to touch you all over
And my heart
wants to touch your heart
until the love flows.

JamesLee
17February
2012

  

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-02-19 09:36 PM


Eh, with all that you want, surely some of it will take . . . and she will be yours . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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2 posted 2012-02-20 09:31 AM


I understand these longings... and you've written them beautifully! *S*
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2012-03-02 09:13 PM


Thank you Jerry and Suthern for the wonderful responses...James
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