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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-02-19 08:04 AM

You reach for my hand
and wrap it in your warm
rough against my soft
strong around my gentle
You tell me you love me
with this simple grasp
You hug my heart to yours
and hold it tight
Everything you need
to say...
is in the palm of your hand.

LGR(C)2/19/12

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-02-19 08:16 AM

Wonderful poetic admission of the love between two lovers. Nice writing, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2012-02-19 08:18 AM

Thanks Jerry, means a lot having you here. Good morning!

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-02-19 12:50 PM

Enjoyed your poem, Lori.
The hands communicate so much, your poem captured it. Ms. E

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2012-02-26 04:52 PM

Makes me want to curl up and spend Sunday in bed.

A

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2012-02-26 05:15 PM

If you were reaching
for a perfect measure
of love
you overfilled
your cup in this one.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2012-02-29 02:06 AM

OH WOW!
This is so beautiful!!
Now this is a Hallmark Card...
Nice one, Lori!!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2012-02-29 11:16 AM

Ms E Thank you for your comment I appreciate it

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2012-02-29 11:17 AM

Alison, sundays are my favorite days in bed too!

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2012-02-29 11:19 AM

Thanks Karilea! What a sweet thing to say

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

10 posted 2012-02-29 11:20 AM

Thanks JL, I always thought that would be a cool job to have.

Lori

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