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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2012-02-17 08:02 PM


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So
You are there

I feel you
Beating
Against my chest

Know
I’m not afraid of you
Bringing what you must

All things
Then come to an end

The wine was good
The food was blest


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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (02-17-2012 08:50 PM).]

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Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2012-02-18 07:30 PM


Amen...
         ida

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2012-02-20 02:55 PM


Oh.  Yes.  A perfect, ah so moment.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
3 posted 2012-02-20 03:14 PM


Good write

juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
4 posted 2012-02-20 07:57 PM


Well done, Ms. E
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