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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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roses can be read when the petals fall and the wind moves them over ashes asunder violets are blue mostly before they wilt and turn pungent with scent drawing only flies to applaud I could say I only miss you when my eyes blink momentarily but you cover my mouth then with a fevered kiss duration and tell me words are useless now that our skin has mended and been combined like hours in conjoined healing of itches that makes us everything, unsaid ____________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (02-14-2012 08:06 AM).] |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
WoW A genuine Dark Valentine~~~ XOXOX |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BBBel1e....thanks little dark daughter |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
and tell me words are usless now that our skin has mended and been combined like hours in conjoined healing of itches that makes us everything, unsaid Yes, a thousand times. I love this.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Nicole..thanks babe...it smiles me to wear your eyes. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I didn't know what to expect... but I sure like what I found! *S* The ending is especially wonderful! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Suthern, thanks lady friend |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
The valentine that keeps on giving. That's just one more thing I love about your poetry. Batteries are not included or needed. Like that big pink bunny, your poems keep on coming around and sharing wonderful visuals in your word-weaving. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Ali-san, thank you lady- |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Sometimes we reach into our pockets, and Zu Zu's petals are not there, and words fall meaningless-("words are useless") spreading out over ashes of one we once were. But then (by) a "conjoined healing of itches" we are mended, our identities return-an angel gets its wings, a bell tolls by the motion of a "conjoined healing of itches" And then there is the refactory period in which things need not be explained, left--rightly so, "unsaid" excellent poetry |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble mumble thanks Ice... |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
smiles... I wanted to read this again; it fills the empty places. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Nitch...I would not call them empty, I would call them reserved for someone...kind of like reserved parking..thanks babe |
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