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jwesley
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0 posted 2012-02-13 02:52 PM



Yesterdays' Tomorrow
(Valentines Remembered)


Pajama cuffs torn,
things kept too long become worn -
like me, frayed ,
becoming unraveled,
not remembering to stay
where I was.

Doorways beckon -
and a heart
that was always drawn outdoors,
remembers too,
tomorrow is Valentines Day,
and though I forgot her birthday,
our anniversary ,
never, ever, did Valentines
pass by unknown.

Doorways beckon - but
cold, wood floors
remind bare feet - socks,
yes,  socks for outside.

Strings hanging from my cuffs,
when where they put there,
saw them yesterday too . . .
hmmm, I like the style.

Socks . . . in my hand?
Where was I . . .?
Must be dirty.
I'll just set them here
to wash.

Oh,
tomorrow's Valentines Day . . .
I think -

now where did I put that card
I went for yesterday . . .

Pajama cuffs torn,
things kept too long become worn,
frayed , unraveled,
not remembering . . . yesterdays'
tomorrow.

© wesley james beard, jr.
february 2012




© Copyright 2012 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-02-13 03:05 PM


Hah! You playing my song in double time, j.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2012-02-13 06:24 PM


Very well done.  I too am in the age of confusion.  Love, Joyce
bel1e
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3 posted 2012-02-14 08:55 AM


Sweet stuff, J~*~*

              

Nicole
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4 posted 2012-02-14 09:01 AM


Sweet, soft and familiar, J... very nice
JL
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5 posted 2012-02-14 01:14 PM


For a moment I was looking in a mirror...
You know how to make the simplest of
thought so important, to be aware of.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Michael
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6 posted 2012-02-14 08:42 PM


Good stuff J.  Couldn't help but smile reading this.

Michael

MICHELMAS
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7 posted 2012-02-15 06:38 AM


Yesterday once more.......if only

Michael

ice
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8 posted 2012-02-15 07:16 AM


This is a wonderful poem, which I relate to in many ways..

"Doorways beckon -
and a heart
that was always drawn outdoors"

There it is, a heart drawn to the outdoors is going to forget to remind the brain to remind the hands to cut off the tattered strings..but this poem comes from that heart....thats the important part it did not forget.

Thats why my wife has to cut the strings from my old clothes.I don't see them...lol

I enjoyed this poem very much..
Thank you Jim-wesley

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9 posted 2012-02-17 02:37 PM


It may be the thought that counts... but hanging onto those thoughts gets tough! *S* I loved this tender write!
ebonygirl
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10 posted 2012-02-17 03:56 PM


Enjoyed your poem J, so gently written.
Ms. E

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