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The Wind |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
The Wind Carries me to places, places yet unknown It sweeps my mind before all time When only one could groan The Wind Has always carressed, my hands, my hair, my face I reach to touch it, and then again, it reaches back as friend The Wind I speak, into as whispers, it's breezes of secrets tell Me, time and, time and, time again It's time to live and live well. --------------------- E.M.L. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is overflowing with charm and delightful in its rendering of oneness with the Source. Yes, you hear the whispers, dear Ebonygirl, and you interprete them beautifully. Margherita  |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Margherita, Smiles, Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
To have a relationship with nature, and wind in particular, is a wonder and joy as you have so aptly rendered here, Ms E. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you JP, I so appreciate your comment. Ms. E |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Just wonderful. Goes good with my own 'The Wind'. Saving this. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Soul Drifter. I'd like read your poem, how do I find it. Ms. E |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Oops, I know how, Soul Drifter. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Sometimes soft, sometimes sass the wind comes to play touches face and messes hair still takes your breath away! I like the playfulness and the romp, especially the freshness! Lovely poem Ms. E..  KL |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Klassy! Appreciate your words. Ms. E |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
The Wind Has always carressed, my hands, my hair, my face I reach to touch it, and then again, it reaches back as friend I love how you describe this here; it is so poignant and true. "reaches back as a friend"...awesome image. It is almost as if it is a part of you throughout. So nicely done |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Nicole, your comment brought on a great big smile. ms. eeeeee! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed your poem too, Ms. Klass. I love the wind messing up my hair. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I have found that the wind knows bes, E.G. It has many secrets to tell, but I don't have to tell you that,your poem says just that.:-) enjoyed the read |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Indeed it does Ice. Thanks for looking in. Ms. E |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I love the wind, the secrets it keeps and those it shares ... silently or wailing.... you did good my friend... j. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think this is one of your best, Edna. Ida |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you for your comment and J, for enjoying the wind as much as I do. Thank you Ida, I appreciate you always. E |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"The Wind I speak, into as whispers, it's breezes of secrets tell Me, time and, time and, time again It's time to live and live well." I absolutely love this!! It's a beauty, Ms. E... JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you JL, you are kind to comment. Ms. E |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The wind has been my friend, my dance partner... my enemy (hurricane)... and still I'm drawn to it. *S* And I absolutely love your poem! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Suthern! Thank you for the like! Yes, I'm with you, always have been drawn to the wind. You, are a strong woman to have had to contend with Big Katrina. Would like to hear about it over coffee, one day. Ms. E |
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Ron63 Junior Member
since 2012-03-18
Posts 49Suffolk, Eng, UK |
This is an interesting concept; having a friendly relationship with the wind. I feel you are spot on with that; the wind getting close, hugging us, scruffling out hair as a tease and so on. You have written a lovely nature poem for me to enjoy! Thank you. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Ron... pleased you enjoyed. Ms. E |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I've always had the notion the wind is a living thing... this only adds to that feeling. To hear it... to feel it... to *know it's calling you. I really liked this one Ms. E. Michael |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Michael... for sharing the wild... I mean wind with me. Smiles, Ms. E |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Ebony Girl,I also enjoyed this post.Love the way you phrase your thoughts.jo |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you so much Jo! Smiles, E |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
i love this wind, graceful and metaphorical thanks yann |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Yann, I've often wondered how the poem would sound like in French? Ms. E |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...I love it when the wind is blowing at least 25mph...it seems so refreshing walking in the wind like God is blessing me...James |
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