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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2012-02-10 11:00 AM


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I look on your face
The moon at night

On golden domes
Over Delhi Rome
Your light
Enduring Jerusalem

The air is blue
On jungles hills
The different seas
Upon their shores

And know
How near or far away
I might be on any given day

No matter where in history

I am home


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2012-02-10 05:54 PM


Love this, it speaks of a poignant truth.

Margherita

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
2 posted 2012-02-11 07:43 AM


Love these lines to true art!....Light and power of benevolence radiate the gold of Spirit on man's aspiration for beauty and sustenance. I gravitate to the tenderness of home painted in the imagery for a race not so wise in it's journey.   ~KL
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