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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2012-02-09 06:26 AM


sometimes we make classics out of ordinary
like mules for sister sarah you said
but her lips were pretty when she smiled

and you would prefer horses if it were you
but we would do it together with broomsticks
and they would never outrun our legs or minds

you sat by the fountain in your mischief pose
I love how your eyes glow when you pretend
not to have anything special on your agenda

well maybe a couple of things or three perhaps
if quietly done in the middle of rush hour
with the lights on and the sun shining in

and we left the tv on so sarah could finish

_____________

daark (juxtaposing while a movie disturbs the foreground saturation)

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Nicole
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1 posted 2012-02-09 06:32 AM


*laughing*  I love this
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2012-02-09 06:34 AM


Ms Nicole...thanks babe..don't ya just hate it when videos or movies show up in your head for no reason?
Margherita
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3 posted 2012-02-10 04:24 AM


quote:
but we would do it together with broomsticks
and they would never outrun our legs or minds


Isn't that just an amazing thought ... I always find poetic diamonds within your already rich "miner's luck" offerings.

Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2012-02-10 06:25 AM


Thanks Ms mar..you bless me
Angel4aKing
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5 posted 2012-02-10 01:54 PM


WOW

~~~kingsangel~~~

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