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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-02-09 05:32 AM

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I see your face
I taste your mouth
your tongue
this is like nothing that's ever happened before
I'm affected in a way unbelievably sensuous
when I think of you
it's as though I'm on fire
and you are the only one can put it out
sometimes I question my sanity
still, tuning you out
or turning you off
is a lot different than changing channels
on the radio or TV
I close my eyes
the vision of your blue eyes come into view
eyes which undress me
make me naked
and not just my body
but inside me too
I feel exposed
to the whole damn world
you, my darling
loving you beyond all reason

©February 6, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

At a cocktail party, one woman said to another,
'Aren't you wearing your wedding ring on the wrong finger?'
'Yes, I am. I married the wrong man.'

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2012-02-09 06:23 AM

Safe to say Jerry, you have a bad case of being in love

Happy for you my friend. Love this one.

Lori

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

2 posted 2012-02-09 06:23 AM

make me naked
and not just my body
but inside me too

Now that is vulnerability; but around someone that you love and trust, that vulnerability becomes an exhilarating freedom. I like the effect of the picture with the poem, too Jerry.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-02-09 06:31 AM

Thanks, Lori, I'm definitely in love, but I don't consider it bad, just passionate and . . . well . . . maybe a little bad. Heehee

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I totally agree about the vulnerability which causes complete freedom, Nicole. Thank you for you for reading and commenting.

At a cocktail party, one woman said to another,
'Aren't you wearing your wedding ring on the wrong finger?'
'Yes, I am. I married the wrong man.'

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2012-02-09 07:48 AM

Jerry....
You little devil you!
Heeeheeee...
Seriously, I am happy you have someone to share your life with. Very nice write!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2012-02-09 08:09 AM

Yeah, JL. I feel like a little devil sometimes. Appreciate the comments and the Heeeheeee...

At a cocktail party, one woman said to another,
'Aren't you wearing your wedding ring on the wrong finger?'
'Yes, I am. I married the wrong man.'

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2012-02-09 08:21 AM

It's so "quivery" beautiful to be unveiled on all levels to the beloved, you express this in an enticing way, dear Jerry.

It is quite right to be "out of one's mind" in love matters, because one tends to melt with each other's mind ... and heart.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

7 posted 2012-02-09 08:55 AM

You are a wise person, Margherita, for understanding the complexities of love. Thank you for continuing to support me here at PiP.

Lady put an ad in the classifieds: 'Husband Wanted'.
Next day she received a hundred letters.
They all said the same thing: 'You can have mine'

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

8 posted 2012-02-09 10:52 AM

JP, you make me want to scream with happiness and excitement for you. ENJOYED, your poem.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2012-02-09 10:55 AM

Good to see you again, Ms. E, and thank you so much for your best wishes.

Lady put an ad in the classifieds: 'Husband Wanted'.
Next day she received a hundred letters.
They all said the same thing: 'You can have mine'

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