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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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0 posted 2012-02-08 10:01 PM


Free to Travel

Those that learn the
lessons of love
will know
that when someone
they love
leaves them
it is not
to hurt them
it is love going
where it wants to go
for love has no boundaries
or time limitations
love is free
to travel.

Do you agree?

JamesLee
04February
2012



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2012-02-09 03:10 AM


Dear James, yes I agree, most often the leaving by one partner is not caused by the will to hurt, simply the heartbeat echoes in another direction.

The love that has connected two people doesn't die, the wonderful emotions still resound in the Universe, even after the "separation", I believe.

Very insightful!

Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2012-02-09 05:55 AM


No matter what the reason, being left with a shattered heart, hurts.

At a cocktail party, one woman said to another,
'Aren't you wearing your wedding ring on the wrong finger?'
'Yes, I am. I married the wrong man.'

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2012-02-09 03:12 PM


Nice writing, James.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2012-02-19 09:10 PM


Thank you Margherita, Jerry and JL for the wonderful responses...James
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