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Effigy
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since 2000-04-11
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disbelief

0 posted 2012-02-08 07:49 AM



A momentary shift in psychology
from which a 3 minute rupture emerges a new reality;
      -She felt no way out -
short but not sweet, bitter and ever so dangerous
reality crashes down half a bottle too late.
      -Tunnel to the outside-
Flashing lights, a gurney at my door
empty pill bottles on the floor.
Am I dreaming?
Will she wake up?
Oh GOD, what has she done?
Oh God help!



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2012-02-08 02:22 PM


You render this dramatic moment so powerfully that I feel it deeply along with you.


Margherita

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