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ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
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0 posted 2012-02-07 10:26 PM



Heres to me,to you, to us, to everyone whos ever felt pain.
The pain that makes are soul grow cloudy till it rains.
for those who have tried to to say im over it and still at night cried.
As i sit here in a daze,a daze about you.
my heart suddenly lights up ablaze
then i realize the past must fade away.
that the future is made
and that the blade no longer makes the pain go away.
the shining heart that you once made complete,
you now make incomplete and shatter with a shutter into shards.
i sit here in a daze and try to find my way outside this maze which youve left me in.
i hope your happy with all your lies and games,
cuz ill no longer mame you and your stories that
your different because  you are the same as all the rest, and your not the best of them either.
So heres to all of us whove cried at night, and fought the sad truth with might.
move forward and move on and simply live on!

© Copyright 2012 richard salgado - All Rights Reserved
The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
Posts 337
Florida, USA
1 posted 2012-02-11 11:18 PM


This is an awesome poem. I like the way you let your feelings flow. This is very heartwrenching! I truly enjoyed the read!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


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