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Open Poetry #48

February

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2012-02-06 11:05 AM

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Now unloved
You’ve moved
To the end
Of an unlit aisle

A darkened corridor
I do not go into willingly
Having always other
And better things to do

Sometimes for weeks
I forget your name

It drifts in the air
Asking for you
To which I answer
Who?

To that man I was
The heart he had
Still there’s something
Faintly sad

When I watch him
Disappear

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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (02-07-2012 11:37 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2012-02-07 11:36 AM

You define the "faintly sad" very powerfully.

Margherita

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2012-02-09 04:58 PM

Indeed, sad but very powerful words.
Ida

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