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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-02-05 05:51 AM


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I will make love to you so preciously
so tenderly, even as I become stronger and forthrightly
you will begin to talk in ancient tongues
I cover your mouth with my own
and you speak into my throat words you can't contain
saying I'm making you feel as a female is supposed to feel
you cannot stop the words
they keep coming with assault weapon efficiency
until they turn into shrieks into my hand
which by now is slightly bloody and saliva sopped
as you passionately inform me; You are privy
to woman's primitive passion's worth . . .


©February 4, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton



At a cocktail party, one woman said to another,
'Aren't you wearing your wedding ring on the wrong finger?'
'Yes, I am. I married the wrong man.'

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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1 posted 2012-02-05 11:56 AM


Jerry OMG talk about sizzling hot yeow!

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2012-02-05 11:59 AM


Heehee . . . Thank you, Lori. . .

At a cocktail party, one woman said to another,
'Aren't you wearing your wedding ring on the wrong finger?'
'Yes, I am. I married the wrong man.'

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2012-02-05 01:26 PM


Wow! Extremely well worded/written, my friend! And flowed wonderfully smooth.

Ya did good!

j.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2012-02-05 02:09 PM


Haha! Thank you, j., for your kind words.

At a cocktail party, one woman said to another,
'Aren't you wearing your wedding ring on the wrong finger?'
'Yes, I am. I married the wrong man.'

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