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It was a Dream
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It was a Dream |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Last night I dreamed under the sky, where snow embraced the ground and I breathed out warm clouds. I looked from my left and my right the sky was like a dome. Decorated with stars, sliver stars? no but golden stars that flew over me like fireflies that mate in midsummer. Yes in midsummer before they truly die bringing forth a new generation of stars that they too will grace the sky. I tried to count them but they were too fast and my eyes were becoming heavy, I yearn to sleep. But how can I be if I was asleep, yet it didn't matter the moon rised my eyelids fell. Only to be awaken, touched by golden rays from the sun. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great visual, Ken206573. Felt the cold night as I read. Enjoyed the flight of the comets... JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Very original and very expressive. Also, very beautiful, Ken. I like it lots. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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