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ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

0 posted 2012-02-01 05:21 PM

From morning to night

Little ptaches of snow evaporate
under a timid sun. Releasing a
fragrance fo wet earth, cleansing
my soul so sweetly. So sweetly.

Leaving with the sun I encountered a
sky welcoming stars. I counted three of them
who actually arrived on time, yet vanish
from my view under street lamps.

One soft night I walked
under sweeping winds. I looked up to
see the moon being cradled by silhouette
branches smoothed with a sable
brackground.

The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

1 posted 2012-02-01 09:32 PM

This is very beautifully written.

I loved the imagery. I truly enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2012-02-01 11:25 PM

"One soft night I walked
under sweeping winds. I looked up to
see the moon being cradled by silhouette
branches smoothed with a sable
background."

Very nice short poems!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

3 posted 2012-02-04 05:11 PM

To: The_Doctors_Angel_32- Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

4 posted 2012-02-04 05:12 PM

To: JL- Always happy to have a comment from you. Thanks for reading.

mvvenkataraman
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since 2011-11-12

Posts 72
India

5 posted 2012-02-05 02:16 AM

Dear respected ken206573,

A fine poem is by you weaved
I feel I myself doing that
Really very soothing to heart
Thank you dear for this write
May Nature bless your talent.

With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,

mvvenkataraman

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2012-02-05 02:31 AM

intense as a music and beautiful, enjoyed very much,

yann

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

7 posted 2012-02-28 05:40 PM

To mvvenkataraman- Thank you for your wonderful comment it made my heart leap with a smile.

ken206573
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since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

8 posted 2012-02-28 05:41 PM

To 2ilander2- Thank you for reading and commenting. Very pleased indeed.

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