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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-01-31 10:57 AM


wicker weave of cotton clouds
sky mouth swallowing, a maybe so, sun
perhaps the belly earth is that thunder

the windows are lucky to see you here

one ribbon almost secretly tied
in a bow big enough to seem reasonable
for accidental becoming discovery

that perfume will paint the walls anew

your hair makes sighs on shoulders
when you nod your head in agreement
wordless is most often more lovely

that chair has known women, but not angels

your eyes move up to my gaze more slowly
than mine did to know your every secret
but I know they will return to some places

you say your lipstick is almost kiss proof

___________

daark


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bel1e
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1 posted 2012-01-31 06:40 PM


Ohhhh....now that was lovely....enjoyed this immensely, daddy

              

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2012-02-01 06:11 AM


thanks BBBel1e
Nicole
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3 posted 2012-02-01 06:39 AM


this is lovely, and it's a little different.  i like it...
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2012-02-01 07:09 AM


Ms Nicole...thanks lady
Margherita
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5 posted 2012-02-01 10:06 AM


quote:
your hair makes sighs on shoulders



This alone was worth the read, like the cream on top of a hot chocolate. Poetic sweetness to be savored to the last drop ...

Margherita  

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2012-02-01 10:58 AM


Ms Mar, thank you lady friend
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7 posted 2012-02-05 01:56 PM


You paint such a picture of wanton wanting.

ali-san

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