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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-01-29 12:05 PM


Into the Desires of Your Heart

Come and sing along
to whispering palms,
take a dip into
the mighty Pacific Ocean
drink a magic potion
of this Polynesian paradise,
try your luck
roll the dice
share kisses
into the night
with tropical beauties
Asian cuties
full of love
fitting like a glove
into the desires
of your heart.

JamesLee
27January
2012

Working in Guam
for 25 days.

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The_Doctors_Angel_32
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since 2011-01-14
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1 posted 2012-01-29 12:16 PM


This is an awesome poem. I can tell you are enjoying your trip by this poem. I truly enjoyed the read!!!

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb


flash
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since 2010-11-28
Posts 213
miami beach, florida
2 posted 2012-01-29 04:56 AM


Ah you make me yearn for the South Pacific of old and conjure images of Bali and that classic movie.

Still yearning,

Thanks for sharing,

Al

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
3 posted 2012-01-29 08:08 AM


Nice duty there in Guam, I'd say. Loved the sensuousness of the poetry this morning.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2012-01-29 10:31 AM


effective 'Impressionism' !

I'd like to experience those 'whispering palms' ...

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia
5 posted 2012-01-30 05:36 AM


ooh cute lil write James

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

JL
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Texas, USA
6 posted 2012-02-04 12:08 PM


Very nice writing, James.



JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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7 posted 2012-02-05 02:59 PM


There is a bounce of fun in this poem, James.  I'd love to come visit and share the sights and sounds of a tropical world.  You make me smile with your invitation.

A

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