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OwlSA
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0 posted 2012-01-27 06:58 AM



MELLOW BIRTH MAGIC
26 January 2012

You listened to my soul
and wrote a bird song
and sang it in the wind
and a flower was born
you whispered it in my ear
and caged animals ran free
you hummed it in the dark night
and the sun rose laughing
as on the first day
of you and me.

Owl

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bel1e
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1 posted 2012-01-27 07:01 AM


something to cherish~~~~how lovely~

              

OwlSA
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2 posted 2012-01-27 07:18 AM


Thank you, Belle.  I do.

Owl

tracie66
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3 posted 2012-01-27 07:53 AM


this is beautiful, loved it's sweet tones

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

OwlSA
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4 posted 2012-01-27 08:26 AM


Thank you, Tracie.

Owl

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2012-01-27 05:20 PM


Delightful read, Diana.
                        Ida

ebonygirl
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6 posted 2012-01-27 05:30 PM


"You listened..."
It's wonderful to be listened to.
Enjoyed your sweet poem, Owl.
Ms. E

OwlSA
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7 posted 2012-01-31 03:20 PM


Thank you, Ida.

Thank you, eg.

Owl

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