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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-01-27 06:22 AM


we made bird shapes on the warm windows
myself with my hands touching your shadow
and you in the black dress just barely

there were pale places with waterfalls
you said eyes looking there made you want
to show them things they wished for often

so we were the dancers above the brim then
how the sun seemed to search for your charms
and post on billboards those advertisements

that made you giggle at reactive jeans
and grab my hand so we would walk slower
until the shadows caught up with our steps

and there was nothing but hidden to expose


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bel1e
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1 posted 2012-01-27 07:04 AM


love the playful seductive music in the pictures you paint , daddy~

              

LeeJ
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2 posted 2012-01-27 07:04 AM


beautiful Dark

this....

that made you giggle at reactive jeans
and grab my hand so we would walk slower
until the shadows caught up with our steps

and there was nothing but hidden to expose



LeeJ
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3 posted 2012-01-27 07:04 AM


beautiful Dark

this....

that made you giggle at reactive jeans
and grab my hand so we would walk slower
until the shadows caught up with our steps

and there was nothing but hidden to expose



Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2012-01-27 07:08 AM


BBBel1e, thanks daughter...

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ms LeeJ, thank you twice as much lady

tracie66
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5 posted 2012-01-27 07:52 AM


absolutely gorgeous - loved this very much

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2012-01-27 08:13 AM


Ms Tracie...thank you lady
Nicole
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7 posted 2012-01-27 09:03 AM


Sounds like a lovely place for a stroll, to me.  

we made bird shapes on the warm windows
myself with my hands touching your shadow

Mmmmhm  

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2012-01-27 09:05 AM


Ms Nicole...thanks lady...there is a place I enjoy that is mostly glass and elevated and when one leans against it they can observe the patrons below...
ebonygirl
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9 posted 2012-01-27 09:28 AM


"...with my hands touching your shadow..."
Enjoyed the walk against the window.
Ms. E

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2012-01-27 09:48 AM


Ms E, thank you lady


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